dope
yo this is my last chance to get wat i want
this is my last chance to make it up
its my last chance to take wats mine
gotta grab it befoe i run outta time
nice hook kerep up the good work bro
dope
yo this is my last chance to get wat i want
this is my last chance to make it up
its my last chance to take wats mine
gotta grab it befoe i run outta time
nice hook kerep up the good work bro
Thanks man! I'll post up some of my other stuff soon. Nice words btw, would make a good intro.
got damn
what i love about yor music is u make people want the beat drop but u make them wait and thats wat makes it great
Hehe, thanks, I'm very glad to hear this! :P
nice
i have to agree with dj-d. its not hiphop. at least not completly. its has a different type of feel to it with the melody. if the melody were changed, not slowed, but changed it would be hiphop. but its still a bomb ass track nice work
Mh, well. You might be right, a few changes would be good. Thanks again!^^
my opinion
the gutair is a little overpowering. it takes over the entire beat so u dont get that hip hop feel to it. the melody of the gutair is great but overpowering. the bass hit should be deeper too.
Thank you so much for your honest comments, death2frame! I'll work on it again. :]
orginial
damn its a mix of hip hop with a techno sound somehow mixed in it. the sound is tight but i think its missing something tho i cant say wat
Thanks for your reviews, death2frame!
Yes, this could need a new catchy melody. I'll work on this soon, too.^^
my opinion
dude take out that melody synth, make it a gutair, and get a deeper bass hit if u want something more upbeat. thats my honest opinion. great otherwise
Yeah, you're right, this could be much better, especially if I work on it with my new Plugins. Thank you very much for your opinion! :)
very very nice
i find it funny how you can make a song and it have a wide varity of possible lyrics that can go to it. this is my chosen type of lyrics
while they are in control we lose our freedom
with out our decisions we cant control them
we must have in our descions faith
or else blind trust is left in its place
Yeah, thank you very much! I like the choice of your lyrics, great lines! :]
damn son sick as fuck
i have tried so hard done so much
our love is a bond no one can touch
but i think its time you made up your mind
baby please give me a sign
thats straight from my heart
Wow, really emotional, you should try to rap these lines, that would be awesome. And thank you very much for the review, death2frame!^^
i like it bro
but that melody throws me off alot
Hehe, I understand. This is a really crazy song my brother and I enjoyed creating alot. :D
great
with my last breath i will do wat i want
i wont give up i wont back down
i wont stop till mine comes around
i will get wat i deserve
heaven or hell dont matter i preach my own word
nice hook i think.
Wow, that's a great one, too! Stunning how fast you manage to write those good lyrics! Thanks for the review! :P
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