gotta say the beat drop was tight. the wind synth is tight......
im here to change a mind or two, fuck your popularity i just want my crew, west coast east coast it really dont matter, hip hop speaks to all that dead brain chatter, all the fake ass people turnin tricks tryin ta spit cant rhyme a lick when it comes to real shit
the volcals are too high tho....the beat is tight as hell and i have to say i agree.....im tired of it. id love to be on a track with ya
5.00 / 5.00 (- 0.0000060
woop woop!!!! this is tight bro!!!! i gave a 5...and it took away from the score....wtf
Thanks man. Im trying to give rap that Spark it needs. Im so sick of this R&B rap shit......We need a change in rap.......
Oh and the score always does that. lol its cool........
damn bro. u kno me already, i downloaded this and imma use it if thats coo
just fuclking awesome
alright bro imma write to this. but if u could make it like a beat, the accapella is the hook and then make the verse is the beat u made after the accapella but extend it for me. need more verse time cause what i wrote down there is all i have time for, and i need more. pm me bro. please.
i feel these emotions flowin to my heart its amazing i cant begin to start
i cant sort them out my head in a cloud i feel i wanna drown but u bring me down
u make me level with your love this broken heart mended by your touch
please bring me back to the time where the beat would attack and i would rhyme
too much synth dude
way too much. it needs real intruments, or at least real ntrument sounds.
Well, that is actually what I wanted the track to sound like, but I can try to make a version where the synths and so on are replaced with classical instruments. ;)
Thanks for the review!
imma be honest
when i staryted the beat i said no!!! too much synth!!! but when the beat finally dropped i was like alright thats much better. but i still think theres too much synth and not enough real intruments. get a violin in there bro. it would be perfect
this beat very old, very n00bish
bro this beat is epic and the hook is the shit. imma hook man i can make a hook in five minutes, im just lyrical like that, and i wanna use this beat and this hook bro i got it spitin off in my dome right now u gotta let me use this please
yo we da juggaloos we are da wicked clowns
we love to sing it loud we bring it to ya now
on the news at ten oclock we are the ones shun
im sick with this gun and im gonna have some fun
just the start of a verse
this is a pretty tight track bro. ive actually got a hook done and a verse being made. very tight track
Awesome thanks man. I'm down for hearing it when it's done. Be sure to give credit though.
i love how everything seems to go together. tho the melody being off beat did kinda ruin its still good. other then the melody, everything sounds stock, like nothing was mixed.
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